safekeeps: (I say)
Elenora Katharina Sophie von Meding ([personal profile] safekeeps) wrote in [community profile] saveyourbrain 2015-03-23 01:11 am (UTC)

Well, you hold it incorrectly.

[He looks at the broken umbrella in Maglor's hand with disdain and then, after a brief moment of considering it, simply takes it out of the older male's hand without a question of if it is okay and studies it for another moment.]

You held it at a 35 degree angle towards the wind, likely to look at your watch. A frequent mistake. [Nimble, slender yet strong fingers bend the umbrella back into shape, resting shortly at a point of tension on one of the spokes.] It will break the next time that you do that. [And then he hands the fixed umbrella back to Arnold.]

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